Re: [libreoffice-design] LibreOffice Tri-Fold Pamphlet for SCALE ( was Re: [us-marketing] Re: LibreOffice Pamphlet)

Hi Drew, Marc, all

drew schrieb:
> Hi,
>
> Well over an early coffee, I went ahead and merged Italo's comments into
> Marc's latest on the wiki, and added one more graphic - thought maybe an
> actual logo, the contemporary style might be nice, and it balances out
> the columns when opened wide, IMO.
>
> So draft 3 for the show specific pamphlet:
>
> http://baseanswers.com/libo/LibOPamphlet_scale_9x_b.pdf

It's hard to keep in pace with you guys - great work!

From my POV this pamphlet fits very well with the Branding Guidelines, 
so no need to change it.

Nevertheless some thoughts...
(you know me - can't admit that some work is just perfect ;-) )

You added the Web and Chart icons to the graphic on the second page.

Why did you leave out Macro?

I would not suggest to promote Writer/Web actively - it has not been 
worked on for years and I didn't hear any positive reaction during the 
same time.

The Base icon on page 1 seems to be positioned slightly too low - 
leading to a fifth indented line, while all the other app's show four of 
them.

I don't know if you want to mention Chart on the first page too - 
perhaps a problem of space.

Speaking of "six feature-rich applications" directly below an image 
showing nine document icons looks a bit strange to me.

Perhaps an image showing the 6 applications in a star-like positioning 
indicating their inter-relationship might be an idea...

And one point to the text content: Under "The LibreOffice Project" (as 
"project" is a task leading to an end in my understanding I'd prefer 
"Community") there is more than twice as much text about the product as 
about the community - in fact, invitation to join us is the weakest 
position in the entire pamphlet IMHO (of course it's user-related, but 
showing them a way to be involved in a relevant way - possibly leading 
to better inclusion of their interests in community and product - might 
be important too).

As said - no reason to modify the pamphlet: Just some input for the case 
you want to keep on working on it ...

Best regards

Bernhard

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