Re: [us-marketing] Re: Next Decade Manifesto Video Loop

On Fri, 2010-12-31 at 03:23 -0500, Marc Paré wrote:

> Hi Drew:
>
> First loop:
>
> * First off I would remove the quotation marks. There is no need for 
> them here.
> * Apply proper punctuation to all slides.
> * At the start, "The Next Decade Manifesto" seems too fast, it is hard 
> to read. I would suggest slowing it down for legibility.
> * The ending is a little choppy, but I think you know this already.
>
> Second loop:
> * Add punctuation and remove quotation marks.
> * The start (Document Foundation) is too choppy.
> * The manifesto fly-in is good but IMO it stays static too long before 
> the window overlays start. I would shorten this part up a little.
> * The overlay windows are great.
> * End is choppy.

Marc,

Great - thanks for the feedback - I think loop_b is the winner here, but
with the display window from _c and the timing of _a...ROFL..

Happy new year by the way, Eh!

Anyway - I'll take care of the punctuation. Will be working on a true
final run for loop_b first, and next.

In the meantime I've been working on the next set of files..see next
email.

Drew



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