Re: [libreoffice-marketing] Idea: script for general purpose LibreOffice marketing video

Hi Mike,

Mike Saunders wrote on 30-05-16 18:09:

> We have various videos talking about new features in LibreOffice 5.1,
> but I was also thinking about making a general purpose video explaining
> what the software is, what it does, how it's developed, why it's
> important and so forth. Here's a script I've put together -- any
> feedback would be welcome!

Nice, thanks!
At a first reading, I see only two things:

> And thousands of people have done so: LibreOffice is developed and
> supported by a worldwide community, and it's available in XXX languages,

xxx = 100+


> Tens of millions of people use LibreOffice every day, in homes, schools,
> workplaces and government departments. And for companies that want to
> switch to LibreOffice, commercial support and migration assistance is

"companies that switch"

Ciao - Cor


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