[libreoffice-website] [Bug 61467] New: The new LO 4.0 "splash" pages could benefit from NL copy editing

https://bugs.freedesktop.org/show_bug.cgi?id=61467

          Priority: medium
            Bug ID: 61467
                CC: website@global.libreoffice.org
          Assignee: libreoffice-bugs@lists.freedesktop.org
           Summary: The new LO 4.0 "splash" pages could benefit from NL
                    copy editing
          Severity: normal
    Classification: Unclassified
                OS: All
          Reporter: qubit@runcibility.com
          Hardware: Other
            Status: UNCONFIRMED
           Version: unspecified
         Component: WWW
           Product: LibreOffice

The text on the LO 4.0 "splash" pages of the libreoffice.org website could use
revision for grammatical content in English. These pages appear to be have been
translated from another language and do not scan smoothly.

As these pages serve as very prominent marketing tools for LO, I think that we
should fine-tune them for each NL whenever possible.

Examples:

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Below are some noticeable changes brought by this version and you can get the
full list in the release notes.
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You'll find several of our most important improvements listed below. For a full
list of changes, please peruse the Release Notes.
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Gerrit is used for our code review and easy contribution --- close to 1500 code
changes reviewed and merged with it!
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We now use Gerrit for both code contributions and code review -- we've reviewed
and merged nearly 1500 changes with this invaluable tool!
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Conversion with non-natives formats, like RTF or DOCX have significantly
improved
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We've significantly improved our support for non-native formats such as RTF and
DOCX
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