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Le 2011-05-16 08:12, drew a écrit :
On Mon, 2011-05-16 at 03:33 -0400, drew wrote:
Howdy,

Uploaded a submission of a tri-fold pamphlet for use inside the tall
disc case. Most of the text is from a file Tim sent via PM a few days
ago, with a bit brought back from the first one I put up earlier.


http://wiki.documentfoundation.org/cgi_img_auth.php/8/86/Na-dvd-insert.pdf


<snip>

http://lo-portal.us/temp/na-dvd-insert-may-16.odt


updated both files just now, fixed typos, some formatting changes.

Middle panel on first page could use some re-wording still, IMO
also need to add some trademark info still - so I'll hold off on
touching though for the rest of the morning

Thanks

//drew



Thanks for doing this Drew and Tim. Here are my suggestions (remember, they are only my suggestions):

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p.1, panel 1

Info
* brief information ...

*** (suggest a bullet at the start of the blurb) ***

Install
* has the various ...

*** (suggest a bullet at the start of the blurb) ***

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p. 1, panel 2

Extensions
An extension ... These include add-ons such as formatting tools, language tools, and over 180 localised dictionary extensions.

*** (I don't think you need the rest of the blurb on Mexican dictionaries and one or more for each country listed. I find it strange that there are 20 different Mexican dictionaries. We will have to get some of our Mexican language partners to sort this out. We should also avoid the use of the 1st person plural "We".) ***

These extensions, as well as most files ending in the .oxt file "extension" can be installed by using the default Extension Manager [Tools>Extension Manager].

*** (I tried to condense this sentence, it sounded too choppy.) ***

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p. 1, panel 2

Templates

There are two types of template files included on the DVD:

* Files ending with ".oxt" will add templates to the “File > New > Template and Document“ list.

*The second type of files are in compressed/archived file groups and can be unarchived using a standard archive manager program [7Zip is included in the list on the “Extras” page]. These are sample files that are opened like normal document files.

*** (reworked paragraphs, bullet form please) ***

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p. 1, panel 2

Documentation

Documentation files included on this DVD are in either the ".odt" OpenDocument file format [ODF], a long established International Standard [ISO] set of file formats, or, ".pdf" Adobe Acrobat file format. LibreOffice uses the international standard ODF as its default office suite file formats.

*** (I tried to condense this to a stronger paragraph, we should also not speak of MS in a negative way and MS claims they are following an ISO approved xml standard anyway. let's not mention them at all in this passage. No need to sell people on the .pdf format. If they don't know about it, they can use our format, which is what we are trying to promote.) ***

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p. 1, panel 3

There are two types of artwork files on the included on the DVD:

* Files ending with ".oxt" will be added to the "Tools>Gallery" option.

* The second type of files are in compressed/archived file groups and can be unarchived using a standard archive manager program [7Zip is included in the list on the “Extras” page]. These are are individual or groups of image files that can be used by LibreOffice or any other packagethat can use image files.

*** (reworked paragraph to match the Templates paragraph, bullet form please) ***

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p. 2 panel 2

*** Our mission is, IMHO, a little slim. Whereas later we say "Tell the world you share our visions, join our group and fan page at http://facebook.com/documentfoundation. There is little vision that we have given the user on the pamphlet. This is something we really need to get to work on as a marketing group. ***

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Cheers

Marc





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