Re: [libreoffice-marketing] Re: Draft Conference PR

Hi :)
+1
It often sounds sexier with the slightly foreign sound (eg such as "the everyone") but it's 
probably better to be right.  "Explains" is active and makes it more exciting whereas "explained" 
puts it in the past.  "Explained" is correct though. 

One advantage of only getting things like this only 90% right is that it draws attention to the 
international nature of the project.  So, it's a feature not a bug ;)
Regards from
Tom :)  


--- On Mon, 25/6/12, David Batterson <dwbatterson@gmail.com> wrote:

From: David Batterson <dwbatterson@gmail.com>
Subject: Re: [libreoffice-marketing] Re: Draft Conference PR
To: marketing@global.libreoffice.org
Date: Monday, 25 June, 2012, 7:13

RE: This is a major event, not only
for those involved in the project, but also for the everyone interested
in the use of free office software and open standards", explains Florian
Effenberger, Chairman of the Board at The Document Foundation.

I suggest these corrections:  Change "but also for the everyone" to: but
also for everyone
Change "explains Florian" to:  explained Florian
Change "at the Document Foundation" to: of The Document Foundation.




On Sun, Jun 24, 2012 at 11:02 PM, Marc Paré <marc@marcpare.com> wrote:

> Hi Florian,
>
> If we are going to publish this again, some suggested corrections:

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