[us-marketing] Re: LibreOffice Pamphlet

Le 2011-02-09 16:01, Carl Symons a écrit :

> > Re: BASE -- adding info on the backend. I have tried to move text around but
> > there is just not enough space left. Should we just leave it as is? Can
> > anyone add a short blurb on backend? That particular paragraph -- I think I
> > can squeeze another 8 words in there.
>
> Try this...
>
> Now:
> Base is a full-featured desktop database front end, designed to meet
> the needs of a broad array of users. The  front end is a powerful
> asset adding major functionality and potential to the other
> LibreOffice applications.
>
> Proposed:
> Base is a full-featured desktop database, designed to meet the needs
> of most users. It is a valuable asset for adding power to other
> LibreOffice applications. Base can also be used as a front end to most
> enterprise-class databases.
>
> Use and modify as you wish. I think this describes Base in a way that
> captures its low AND high end uses.

Looks good. That's exactly what we need! I'll have to edit it later ... 
running late for a meeting, unless someone else modifies this.

Thanks for all of your help.

Cheers

Marc


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