Peter,
Hazel sent me the chapter she had trouble with, so I could restore the
images while preserving her edits. I've now done that and returned it
to Repository> English> Documentation> Impress Guide> Proofing.
I have some suggestions for a few of the images.
Figures 3 & 16: The labels seem a bit small compared with the text on
the page. Could the font be made a bit larger?
Figure 7: This pic was cut off in an earlier version of the book in
order to fit it on the page without kicking the Fig 8 to the next page
and leaving a big gap at the bottom of this one, but it left the
"Notes" area a bit small. On this page, there is room for a bit more
of the dialog to show.
Otherwise, I think this chapter is ready to publish.
--Jean